Choosing the Mobile Phone
The mobile phone is the most popular and convenient product now. More and more people need the mobile phone to connect with their friends, discuss the business with their customers or just chat about everything. There are hundreds of phones and it's hard to choose your favorite one. What will you take into consideration when you choose your mobile phone? On the other hand, what is the main point for your parents to choose their mobile phone? In my opinion, that will be totally different. Young people choose phones with more special functions. The phone is not only used to send message or take pictures, but also record videos, listen to mp3 music or play java games. However, adults don't care about these functions or maybe they don’t know how to use these complicated products. In addition, young people will care about fashion way. They like to choose the newest, the hottest and the most popular type. My parents never think about that because they have no idea which one is the hottest. Lastly is the price. Young people like to have more functions, more popular phone and the price will be higher than the normal one. Perhaps it is about ten to twenty thousands for a new cell phone. Some adults think the phone is just for calling and it’s not necessary to buy the expensive one. How do you choose your mobile phone? I always have a lot to consider before buying one. That's a difficult decision to make selection for me.

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Good job!
So, your topic is: compare young and old people's views when buying a mobile phone? Make your thesis clear and make sure all the sentences are relevant to this topic!
What is the main point for you to choose your mobile phone?
-->What will you take into consideration when you choose your...
The young people will choose more special functions.
-->Young people...choose phones with...
The phone not only used to send message or take pictures, but also record videos, listen to mp3 music or play java games.
-->The phone is not only used to...
In addition, young people will care about the fashion way.
-->care about fashion
Lastly is the price. The young people like to have more functions, more popular phone and the price will be higher than the normal one.
-->Young people...
Perhaps is about ten to twenty thousands for a new cell phone. Some adults think the phone is just using to call and it’s not necessary to buy the expensive one.
-->Perhaps it is...
-->is just for calling...
How do you choose your mobile phone? I always consider what kinds of phone I want. That’s a difficult selection for me.
--> I alwasy have a lot to consider before buying one. ...a difficult decidion to make...
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