Gloria bienvenido

Thursday, September 21, 2006

Hello!!!

My name is Gloria. I'm 23 years old. I live in Tainan city with my family. I'm interested in listening to music, going shopping and watching some sport games on TV. I like football best, especially Spanish football.

Now I work in a cram school. I teach the first and second grade elementary school's students. Sometimes I need to teach them English. I think my English isn't good enough if I want to be a normal English teacher. Even through I just teach some young children. I need to improve my English. That's why I choose to study again.

I graduated from Wenzao language school. My first major is Spanish and second major is English. In Wenzao, I don't like Spanish for the first three years. However, in a winter vacation, I went traveling to Spain with my family. I like the view, the architectures, the air there. When I went to buy a pair of 'camper' shoes in Barcelona, the sales lady could not speak English and I had to communicate with her in Spanish. At that time, I realize the importance of studying other foreign languages. Not all of the world can use English. After that, I try to study hard for my Spanish. Not only for the future work, but also for the communication with other people. Although I didn't use it in my work, I still use it in my life . On the other hand, I like to watch the football game. Sometimes I listened the radio program or watched news about it.

I have graduated for three years. I remember I have learned writing skill when I was at school. But actually I forget the lesson's content. My grammar isn't better. I hope this class can help me to improve my English grammer.

1 Comments:

Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Hello Gloria

Good! Some suggestions for you:

1.I'm interesting in
-->I'm interested in...

2.go shopping
-->going shopping...

3.When I go to buy a pair of shoes in Barcelona. That's a famous bland"camper". But the sales lady can't speak English. -->When I went to buy a pair of 'camper' shoes in Barcelona, the sales lady could not...and I had to communicate with her in Spanish.


4.bland-->brand (check spelling)


5.At that time, I realize the important of study language.
-->the importance of studying other foreign languages

6.Althrough I didn't use it very often right now.
-->Although (condition A), (situation B)

check the usage of 'although'
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=2361&dict=CALD

7.On the other hand, I like to watch the football game. Sometimes I listened the radio program or looked some news about it.
-->watched news...

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